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“Hey positive attitude” doesn’t actually mean anything.In fact, it looks like he’s leading off with a careless error and that will make a lot of women move on before reading anything he has to say.The good news is that he isn’t bragging about things he’s already supposed to be (like honest and mature).The bad news is that there’s literally nothing for someone to connect with in his profile.He talks about being a pet lover, but he doesn’t say anything about his current pet or his favorite childhood pet so that people can feel that he means it.He loves music (who doesn’t) but is he listening to Drake, AC/DC, or Brittney Spears?
If you don’t tell people what you want, you can’t complain about getting a bunch of attention from the people you don’t want to meet.
It is really interesting that he dives right into talking about being honest and mature after using a headline that makes him sound like an outlaw looking for a co-conspirator. You want everything in your profile to lead to the same place.
This headline is going one way and then the profile takes off in the opposite direction.
This tells everyone that he’s not really looking for something and they should pass him by unless they just find him attractive.
#2 could actually take what he has and expand on the few things he’s written to create a good profile. He’s got the seeds of a good profile here, he just needs to give people more than bullet points.